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Good and Evil by YorukoChikokoro Good and Evil by YorukoChikokoro
This is my second art project of the semester for my 2D Design class.
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I should start by saying this is my first critique. That being said, I have always been a sucker for the bold impact that black and white pieces have. The piece's approximate symmetry using negative color is effective in holding the piece together as one, but contrasting to differentiate the duality presented by both sides.

The content is something that I believe can be understood by most people. Duality of human nature is a common thread between all of us. You have captured the very essence of human nature in the depiction. I also believe it was a good choice to make the female figure white and the male black. Testosterone is generally associated with violence and procreation where as the female hormones are more closely associated with love and nurturing. This way, not only does it represent the internal struggle that many humans face, but it also represents the conflict that can occur from misunderstanding and different perspectives held by the opposite sexes. The fact that they are reaching their hands out to one another expresses a need to find compromise in both and end conflict. In other words, I dig it.

I cannot deny that I have seen very similar concepts done before including a piece of my own tucked away in a portfolio. However, while the concept of using black and white to portray good and evil is not new, I believe the style in which the figures are done gives it a unique flare all your own. And, of course, if it's not broke, don't fix it. Use of black and white has always been an extremely useful way of depicting contrast between morality and a lack thereof. Light and dark, good and evil, knowledge and ignorance, black and white can be very powerful for these common contrasting elements found in society.

The technique used to add detail to the figures is very nice as well. Not only is there very delicate line detail done in black on the 'good' side, but you have also managed to successful add the same effect on the 'evil' side by using negative white space to show the figure detail. This can sometimes be hard to do, but when executed effectively, I think it gives the work of art a very nice touch.

To me, this piece reminds me of the days where I was big into Japanese comics. This piece looks as though it could have been ripped from a page of a very popular manga. That is to say, I think it's wonderful and you are doing a great job to hone your own niche in the manga style genre. Keep up the great work!
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Critique by KOIBEAT Nov 22, 2012, 1:58:31 AM
Hey. You have some pretty interesting stuff. I actually critiqued one of your pieces so now I'm going to try and see if i can be of some help here.

It has already been mentioned in the first critique that the whole black and white monochrome, symmetric, good evil concept has been done thousands of times over so but im sure you were already aware so i'm not going to get into that.

I do like your style of design. The male looking counterpart on the left appears to be more sharper and intimidating. the style to me also resembles something out of 'the nightmare before christmas' while the female counterpart appears to have some kind lukewarm fairy anime vibe.

One thing about the male though is that i feel the hair could be made a bit better. there is something about the look that is subtle but awkward. I think it's the fact that the way the hair falls is a bit unnatural. it has an odd shape. like the shape of his head must be very unusual.

as for the female side i really have no complaints. i noticed the jaggedness on the back part of her dress which i really like for a reason i can't explain.

the biggest area in this i think needs improvement is the overall way you got this onto this site. I think you ought to re-scan it and then try cropping the parts that arent in the composition. maybe consider the fact that the way the colors cut off in the picture, the background of the scan takes a bit of the impact out of the monochrome design. But i dont think it is a big deal because it makes it less intimidating and less 'in your face'.

Some more input on the editing of this-i highly recommend using microsoft picture manager or any program that can darken or lighten, saturate or unsaturate, or increase or decrease contrast before submitting any artwork to this site (if you dont already). And just play around whenever you get the chance. with those three extremely simple features, you can change the identity and feel of all your compositions for better of for worse. I remember the contrast adjustment being my best friend when submitting pencil drawings here.

In this case i think you ought to use the increase of contrast so your black becomes a true black and your whites won't be impure.

Now i wan to take a brief moment to talk about the future. I think that although this is such an extremely common theme and style, that gives it more opportunity for you to experiment different transformations and media. If you are trying to get into another medium like watercolor, ink, or pastel painting, etc. then use something simple like this as your reference. It will make it so much easier and you may come across a version of this design that looks just as good or even better and original.

That is all i have for this one. it's a comforting picture to me somehow. I hope all your upcoming work is coming along well.
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Calutenma Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2014
Its amazing and epicLa la la la 
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YorukoChikokoro Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2014  Student Digital Artist
Thanks :)
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EngulfedInAReverie Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Its amazing! *__*
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YorukoChikokoro Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2014  Student Digital Artist
Thanks :)
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Lolo-98 Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2014  Hobbyist Filmographer
Wow!!! It's amazing!!!!! I love it ^^ Heart Love 
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YorukoChikokoro Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2014  Student Digital Artist
Thanks :)
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Lolo-98 Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2014  Hobbyist Filmographer
Welcome! ^^
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WolfOfDemonSnow Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
This is amazing QoQ!!!!! I love it :D I wish I was as good as chu :3
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YorukoChikokoro Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2014  Student Digital Artist
Thanks. Though this piece is like a year and a half old lol.
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maksvision Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2014   Photographer
This really has a nice impact. The wings are gorgeous! It is very Tim Burton-esque and the male's hair reminds me of Dream from the Sandman.
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YorukoChikokoro Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2014  Student Digital Artist
Thanks for your comment. :) This is such an old piece though XD
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maksvision Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2014   Photographer
No problem! :)
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MrMustasio Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
This is pretty cool :)
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YorukoChikokoro Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Thanks :) Everytime I look back at this drawing with super skinny people I'm like 'did I really draw people that skinny back then?' XD (even though that was last semester....hehe).
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MrMustasio Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh, haha
I know though! Each semester feels like forever even though I may not have the same ones as you =p
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YorukoChikokoro Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Lol Life Drawing this semester really helped with making my people less skinny and more anatomically correct.
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MrMustasio Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I'm jealous. We never got into the realistic stuff, it was all either painting or focal points.
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YorukoChikokoro Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Well she's not exactly teaching us realism...we just get a naked or clothed model in the front of the room and draw her. Our teacher lets us interpret us however we want really.
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MrMustasio Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
oh really? Huh. That's actually a pretty good way to learn it
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YorukoChikokoro Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Yeah. Since I have already been drawing people and self teaching myself its just a make my people less skinny and make sure I have all the proportions correct.
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chillydragon Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2013
Ah, really beautiful job. I esp love the way you draw their wings.
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YorukoChikokoro Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Thanks :)
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nami23zzang Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
THIS IS......AWESOME~!! So fucking cool :) I love this It tells a story :)
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YorukoChikokoro Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Thanks :)
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nami23zzang Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
U deserve it ^^
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YorukoChikokoro Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2013  Student Digital Artist
:) You should check out my other stuff too
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latinacrg Featured By Owner Mar 28, 2013  Student Digital Artist
I really love this one, the contrast of color and theme! Beautiful! Would love to see it with a red heart(small n subtle) that would be awesome!:D Great job!
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YorukoChikokoro Featured By Owner Mar 28, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Lol thanks
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latinacrg Featured By Owner Mar 28, 2013  Student Digital Artist
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YorukoChikokoro Featured By Owner Mar 28, 2013  Student Digital Artist
:)
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Rose279 Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I really like this piece. kinda reminds me of my relationship with my ex. he always saw himself as a dark angel and that i was his angel to save him from his darkness. anyways! :iconloveitsignplz: :icongoodjobsign:
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YorukoChikokoro Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Haha nice.
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warrior1944 Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2013
Love this, easy effect but it works very well :D
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YorukoChikokoro Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Thanks :)
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Corrupteds0ul Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2013
awesome
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BrightenYourSmile Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
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YorukoChikokoro Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Aw thanks :). And you picked one of my most popular pieces too haha.
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BrightenYourSmile Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
Welcome :) Haha so cool :)
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YorukoChikokoro Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Lol :)
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AngelToso Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
This is a very interesting piece. I've got to admit that I'm a sucker for monochromatic pictures. xD The only thing I should point out is the wings. The feathers look a lot more like fur than feathers. the anatomy of the wings are off too. I would suggest studying winged animal anatomy, such as birds. Other than that, you did a very nice job. :)
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YorukoChikokoro Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Yeah I'm not very good with wings lol. But I guess this is just my style of wings :P
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jane-beata Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2012  Professional Traditional Artist
Hello,

Your work has been FEATURED in my Tuesday Feedback Hour journal (:

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YorukoChikokoro Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Yay lol
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jane-beata Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2012  Professional Traditional Artist
I like what this piece is saying at first sight - there is something gentle about it. As if the good and evil in all of us kept in touch, and I'm sure they do. I consider it a work nicely done, it made me think (:

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YorukoChikokoro Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Thanks :)
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melissahess Featured By Owner Oct 14, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I love it
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YorukoChikokoro Featured By Owner Oct 15, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Thanks :)
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lardaspetros Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2012  Professional Traditional Artist
its really nice. keep going
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YorukoChikokoro Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Thanks
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funnygirlygirl99 Featured By Owner Oct 3, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Man that is cool!
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