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Fallen Angel by YorukoChikokoro Fallen Angel by YorukoChikokoro
I might be done with I might not. I know I said it was going to be day and have a sun and such but I decided it would be better to have it at night. I really hope you guys like it. :D
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I Love this Artwork and i'm glad to write a critique on it! And thanks for uploading it to my group!

Vision- Amazing, the fog and the pose of the picture is without any flaw.

Originality- Can't Complain here, It shows complete originality.

Technique- I can see the time and effort you put into this artwork and how you admire it yourself.

Impact- The impact of this picture is amazing i love it.

I'm glad to be able to critique on this artwork and keep up the good work! Nice Job! Can't wait to see more of your work sometime!
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aysetol Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2014
very nice  :)
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:iconrisika93:
Risika93 Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Beautiful. ^^ I love the pose and shading on the hair.
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:iconyorukochikokoro:
YorukoChikokoro Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Thanks :)
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:iconrisika93:
Risika93 Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2013  Student Digital Artist
No problem!
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:iconyorukochikokoro:
YorukoChikokoro Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2013  Student Digital Artist
:)
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Princess-CoCo-154 Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
this is really beautiful, i really love the pose here, and the background, and the hair, and everything else XD really great job on it
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:iconyorukochikokoro:
YorukoChikokoro Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Thanks :)
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Princess-CoCo-154 Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
no problem sweetie!^u^
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GrimmReaperMike Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Awesome! I love how you made the hair flow! It was interesting seeing the different stages of this picture. I should consider doing that.
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:iconyorukochikokoro:
YorukoChikokoro Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Lol thanks :) I mostly do it so people can help me out with any anatomy problems or give me tips.
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Corrupteds0ul Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2013
nice
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astarayel Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2013
What a dynamic picture!! I absolutely love the pose you've chosen here; it's so unique, and it really brings something amazing to the overall impact of the piece. The character's design is nice, too, with a good balance of vibrant and neutral colors.

I think there are two areas of this piece that could use improvement: anatomy and shading. First of all, kudos for tackling such a difficult pose. I'm quite certain I would not be able to come up with something near this good without consulting a bajillion references first. What I've noticed is that things seem a bit too elongated: her neck, for instance, is a bit too long for a human neck, even bending like that; also, the lower parts of her legs are a bit long for the upper part. If you look at anatomical references, you'll notice that the thighs and calves are roughly the same length (excluding the foot). Her head is also turned a fraction too close toward us--that's a minor one, though.

For shading, I would recommend making your shadows more dramatic. For a night scene, I would imagine more light bouncing off the fabric of her clothes and all that, and maybe some moonbeam highlights on her wings. Don't be afraid to play around with radical colors (like purples and blues) for your shadows--doing that will help make this piece even more dynamic!!

Keep up the great work!!
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YorukoChikokoro Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Aw thanks. Yeah I never tried this pose before and I used no references haha. You're only the second person that pointed out the neck was too long. If only someone pointed it out before I started coloring haha. And you should've seen the legs before the final lining they were so freaking off haha. Thanks for you advice though and I will keep it in mind for the future :)
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astarayel Featured By Owner Jan 23, 2013
It's a hard pose! Hooray for digital work, which we can always go back and edit...even if we don't really want to ;)
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:iconyorukochikokoro:
YorukoChikokoro Featured By Owner Jan 23, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Very true haha. You can just make a new layer and draw over it or erase super easily redraw it.
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fibisugar Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
THIS IS AMAZING :D
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123carrottop Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Is her mouth open? (I don't mean to sound stupid lol, I'm just not sure)
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:iconyorukochikokoro:
YorukoChikokoro Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Her mouth is open just a little bit.
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:iconwinterabyss:
WinterAbyss Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
amazing!
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:iconyorukochikokoro:
YorukoChikokoro Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Thanks :)
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:iconhinater:
Hinater Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2013   General Artist
wonderful
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:iconyorukochikokoro:
YorukoChikokoro Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Thanks :)
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:iconomega-t:
Omega-T Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
She is WONDERFUL :D:D:D:D
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:iconyorukochikokoro:
YorukoChikokoro Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Thanks
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Omega-T Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
:D
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CrystalMilevard Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2013  Professional Traditional Artist
Really great! Amazing~ :D
You are super can't wait 4 more!!!!!
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:iconyorukochikokoro:
YorukoChikokoro Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Lol thanks :)
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Raynie-Azuri Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Very nice :D
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:iconyorukochikokoro:
YorukoChikokoro Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Thanks :)
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:iconyunianinjamisterss15:
yunianinjamisterss15 Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
wow ur pic looks good now :D
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:iconyorukochikokoro:
YorukoChikokoro Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Thanks :)
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yunianinjamisterss15 Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
:pat: hehe
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RedVelvet-Cake Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Ooh, pretty~ :D
Though I will say, her neck does looks a bit too long, but other than that, it looks good. :)
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YorukoChikokoro Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Really? You're the first to point that out XD
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RedVelvet-Cake Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
And here I thought I was unobservant. XD
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:iconyorukochikokoro:
YorukoChikokoro Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Haha XD
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