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Angel W/O Background by YorukoChikokoro Angel W/O Background by YorukoChikokoro
Ok here she is all colored. :) There will be a background but I'll work on it tomorrow. I'm done with this for today lol. For the background I think having a blue sky, some white or gray clouds, and a sun somewhere will work. Don't you think?
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Critique time! Same order as usual.

One of the things I noticed was that the light source was indeterminate due to the areas shaded. It appears to be coming from the left, in which case the skirt needs to be shaded more on the right in order to achieve an effective technique. Also, the shadows that are on her top blend in a little too much with the top, making it appear as though the top was just one colour. I would suggest making the shading a darker colour so that this doesn't happen.

Onto the good bits; the lineart is really nice! I love the lineart! I love the technique you have used to shade the skin, as it looks realistic, and adds a nice touch to the piece. The hair is nice, but may need a more determinate light source of the halo-shine.

Other than what I have stated above, this is a nice piece, and I look forward to seeing the completed version!
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AngeroX Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Wooow I love this! *-*!!
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YorukoChikokoro Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Thanks lol there's a finished version of it too
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MachiavelliCro Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2013
Featured here [link] :hug:
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YorukoChikokoro Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Hey I uploaded the finished one of that do you think you can change it to the finished version? [link]
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MachiavelliCro Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2013
Done:)
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YorukoChikokoro Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Awesome thanks :)
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CrystalMilevard Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2013  Professional Traditional Artist
Really Cool!!!!!!! Nothing less, you are getting even better! ^-^
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:iconyorukochikokoro:
YorukoChikokoro Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Thanks :) What do you think of the progress I have so far on the commission I'm working on?
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CrystalMilevard Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2013  Professional Traditional Artist
really cool, pretty colours and really great position, you can also try some blue highlights like stardust or maybe red and purple for more bloody like. But it's really great till now! I am waiting to see it complete!!!! ^-^
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:iconyorukochikokoro:
YorukoChikokoro Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Lol I wasn't talking about this one haha.
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CrystalMilevard Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2013  Professional Traditional Artist
oooops! Sorry... maybe i should get some sleep 3 overnights really made me dummy... hihi... ^-^
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YorukoChikokoro Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Haha nice
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CrystalMilevard Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2013  Professional Traditional Artist
Ok so can you give me the link for it? ^-^
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:iconyorukochikokoro:
YorukoChikokoro Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Just go on my profile page and it's right there in the newest deviations. The one to the left lol
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apples-and-banaynays Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
:3! i like it it's beautiful
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YorukoChikokoro Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Thanks :)
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fibisugar Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
She is beautiful O_O :iconhe-blushplz: im so jealous of your anatomy i need more practice
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YorukoChikokoro Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Haha I've had 4-5 years of practice :3. Thanks though :)
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fibisugar Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
im still jealous… i MUST practice like NOW
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YorukoChikokoro Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Haha practice definitely helps. :) You should've seen my people when I was in 8th-10th grade they were so terrible XD I didn't really improve until Art 3 when I was a junior lol
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fibisugar Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
Im going to do the practice if i can every day now… I going to post an anatomy one i did from looking at something.. i think i can draw better anatomy when i have a reference because of the top of my head is impossible
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YorukoChikokoro Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Lol I've had enough practice and I know the basics enough that I can do it without a reference. Unless it's some super hard one and I can't seen to get it right. I usually ask for help at that point lol.
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fibisugar Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
Im going to watch you because your art is so cool :D and if you dont mind me asking a question about something if i need help.. if you dont mind :iconhe-blushplz:
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YorukoChikokoro Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Aw thanks :) I'm always here to help if you ever need any. :D
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yunianinjamisterss15 Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
wow its looking good now since being colored :D
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YorukoChikokoro Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Yeah :)
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yunianinjamisterss15 Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
:D yup pretty good sounds like u finished it finally
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YorukoChikokoro Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Lol I still need to do the background though
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:iconyunianinjamisterss15:
yunianinjamisterss15 Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
do want me to help find one or u can do it :meow:
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YorukoChikokoro Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Well I was just going to do a sky. I thought I had a cloud tutorial but I can't seem to find it so I'll just find another one
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yunianinjamisterss15 Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
kk :3
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DarkneseOfNightmares Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
She's lookin' good! Are you okay if I critique again?
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YorukoChikokoro Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Go ahead lol
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