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Angel W/O Background by YorukoChikokoro Angel W/O Background by YorukoChikokoro
Ok here she is all colored. :) There will be a background but I'll work on it tomorrow. I'm done with this for today lol. For the background I think having a blue sky, some white or gray clouds, and a sun somewhere will work. Don't you think?
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Critique time! Same order as usual.

One of the things I noticed was that the light source was indeterminate due to the areas shaded. It appears to be coming from the left, in which case the skirt needs to be shaded more on the right in order to achieve an effective technique. Also, the shadows that are on her top blend in a little too much with the top, making it appear as though the top was just one colour. I would suggest making the shading a darker colour so that this doesn't happen.

Onto the good bits; the lineart is really nice! I love the lineart! I love the technique you have used to shade the skin, as it looks realistic, and adds a nice touch to the piece. The hair is nice, but may need a more determinate light source of the halo-shine.

Other than what I have stated above, this is a nice piece, and I look forward to seeing the completed version!
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AngeroX Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Wooow I love this! *-*!!
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YorukoChikokoro Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2013  Student General Artist
Thanks lol there's a finished version of it too
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MachiavelliCro Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2013
Featured here [link] :hug:
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YorukoChikokoro Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2013  Student General Artist
Hey I uploaded the finished one of that do you think you can change it to the finished version? [link]
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MachiavelliCro Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2013
Done:)
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YorukoChikokoro Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2013  Student General Artist
Awesome thanks :)
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CrystalMilevard Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Really Cool!!!!!!! Nothing less, you are getting even better! ^-^
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YorukoChikokoro Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2013  Student General Artist
Thanks :) What do you think of the progress I have so far on the commission I'm working on?
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CrystalMilevard Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
really cool, pretty colours and really great position, you can also try some blue highlights like stardust or maybe red and purple for more bloody like. But it's really great till now! I am waiting to see it complete!!!! ^-^
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YorukoChikokoro Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2013  Student General Artist
Lol I wasn't talking about this one haha.
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